The tigers vs lions race by Privilege

Far away in South Africa there were a tiger king and a lion king, every day they stared at each other like a devil and a hero ,but today is the time to race.

“the race is about to start the first one to cross the finish line wins”said the cheater.”321 go”

The they pasted the jungly bushes,past the swinging monkeys “you will lose”said the lion king the tiger king kept quiet just as the lion king bumped into a tree, the tiger king  was nearly at the finsh line then there was a cliff, the tiger king said “how am I going to jump that far”? the lion king said “with teamwork of course”they made a catapult out of trees and leaves .when they started flying the tiger king said “were not going to make it unless we believe in ourselves”Then a strange thing happened they started flying then they crossed the finsh line together.

The end like and comment.(it took me to do this in school and home tell anyone to see this amazing tigers class)

 

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6 thoughts on “The tigers vs lions race by Privilege”

  1. Privilege is very explicit in his write-up, he uses the right phrases at the right time.
    The tone of the poem shows he is very careful and knows what he is saying..
    More knowledge and understanding to you privilege.

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  2. It goes to show that if we learn to put our differences aside, we can actually achieve more as a TEAM!! Nice one Privilege.

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  3. Great work privilege, I can’t but commend you for the zeal and passion put together to write this poem.
    Amazing.. Keep it up boy.

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  4. Świetna historia, moja ulubiona spośród wszystkich. Na końcu opowiadania super morał. Brawo brawo 👏👏👏

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